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Biographies of fictional character

Post by VBustosM11a on Mon Feb 27, 2017 7:51 pm

Jibran Ali was born on October 2 nd  1903 in India, and died the 15 of 1983 in Berlin, Germany.

A little bit of his childhood: Jibran Ali was born in one of the poorest neighborhoods of India, he lost his father when he was 5 years old since that moment his mom let him in adoption because of the bad economic situation they had, Ali was taken to Germany and a beautiful lady adopt him.

Teenage and adult age: Jibran studied in one of the best schools of Berlin, he graduated as journalist, time later the Second World War began, because of this he wrote a lot of critics, poetry and fiction, all of those books and papers were based on Totalitarianism, Fascism, and Marxism. When the Second World War finish he met a beautiful woman called Sona, Jibran and Sona had five sons, the rest of the life of Ali was normal, he continued writing until his death.

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Re: Biographies of fictional character

Post by Admin on Mon Apr 17, 2017 3:55 pm

Check spelling of dates, include months. Check the past of some verbs (Concordance).
Your grade is 8,0.

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