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Fictional Biography

Post by LGFierroH11A on Wed Mar 01, 2017 7:55 pm

Amitab Barshan Gupta was born in Indira Gandhi's memorial hospital in Yeni Delhi in the 26 of january of 1903, in India's republic day, he studied in Snt. James catholich chucrh the whole primary and secundary because of the good economic situation of his family, at college he studied periodism and literature with little intermissions of law by himslef, later on at his first work in a local newspaper  feeling affected by the unfair trate of government and tired of watch poor people everywhere around his country he decide to start a secret life as a real and authenthic writer by the nickname of "Zoel Jadesh Kippling", he decide to write about fascism, marxism related with India, critics about reality, fictions of a fantasy he thought India needs, poetry as his most sensible and deepest side and later on he wrote about he topic that will bring him death, the totalitarism in India, becasue of this the government decide to close his life door and turn off his light from literature, letters and justice, Amitab was poisoned exactly the 31 of january of 1968.

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Re: Fictional Biography

Post by Admin on Tue Apr 18, 2017 4:14 pm

Really creative, there are some grammar mistakes you need to pay attention to, like the use of past in general and uses of the third person.

your grade is a 9

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